Richard
08-02-2007, 23:28
Well I was walking home from school when I got this urge to write (happens once in a while) lol. Well after about an hour this is what I came up with, Warning might no be suitable for minors:silly: So let me know what you think, any typos,ect...
First time
They say that first love is never forgotten
That your first kiss is always the sweetest
But what is never really understood
Is that first time when two souls, fuse.
It was the day of love when it happened.
Under the gentle shine of the moon
She was guided towards the room
Through the red path of rose petals.
Then the path became one red heart
Over the soft silk bed sheets
While candles lighted our room
In mysterious yet delightful means.
She gazed at my eyes and smiled
While our lips sensed each other,
Our hands gently combined
In a tender everlasting dance.
The air, so full of scents,
Danced around the perfume of the flowers
And so, holding from my hands she surrendered
While gently she laid in our nest of love.
Sweet was the essence that I felt
While my kisses gently covered her perfect body
So divine was her aromatic fragrance
That it drove me mad with desire.
Then I felt her soft skin,
Her warm, moist lips pressing softly to my cheek
And for that brief span of time
I felt lost in the myths.
So frenzied became our desire
Like that of Aphrodite and Adonis
Where she, my sweet gentle goddess
Felt in love with a mere human.
She sighed with pleasure, joy had struck our hearts
And for that brief eternal moment,
I became hers, and she mine.
And so united in love, soul and spirit
We were finally
Just One.
__________________
First time
They say that first love is never forgotten
That your first kiss is always the sweetest
But what is never really understood
Is that first time when two souls, fuse.
It was the day of love when it happened.
Under the gentle shine of the moon
She was guided towards the room
Through the red path of rose petals.
Then the path became one red heart
Over the soft silk bed sheets
While candles lighted our room
In mysterious yet delightful means.
She gazed at my eyes and smiled
While our lips sensed each other,
Our hands gently combined
In a tender everlasting dance.
The air, so full of scents,
Danced around the perfume of the flowers
And so, holding from my hands she surrendered
While gently she laid in our nest of love.
Sweet was the essence that I felt
While my kisses gently covered her perfect body
So divine was her aromatic fragrance
That it drove me mad with desire.
Then I felt her soft skin,
Her warm, moist lips pressing softly to my cheek
And for that brief span of time
I felt lost in the myths.
So frenzied became our desire
Like that of Aphrodite and Adonis
Where she, my sweet gentle goddess
Felt in love with a mere human.
She sighed with pleasure, joy had struck our hearts
And for that brief eternal moment,
I became hers, and she mine.
And so united in love, soul and spirit
We were finally
Just One.
__________________