Our little "Love & Schemes" story

[Heretic]

Unicorns aren't such animals,which go with human being which feed them. :nono:
No,not a Hydra.A green dragon with wings and blowing flames from his mouth,but some species have 9 heads (find some in folklore)
"Trying to not make it a professionally writen story" damn,I don't understand this sentence.Look to grammar :silly:

[Heretic]

I don't see any problems with your character - i.e it all fits together like a hand in a glove -regarding you question 3 then i must say that if we were to remove that, then i'm affraid that we also would have to sacrifice the unicorns ! - i.e. everybody knows that unicorns only approaches virgins ! your character is living together with nature.

btw, i saw you artwork and i think it was really nice.

Hehe,thanks :blush: Everybody can visit there and see my friends Unicorns and my dragons,WHICH LIVE HERE. :cool:

[the knightly sword]

i will write soon

[hawk_knight]

@Hawk_knight. Should be better if you before post your chapter (annex), inform to the others you're working on it. Then you can delete or edit this message. :)


Agree :cheers:

[Kuno of Gersenau]

ohhh...so many new posts, now I have to read for a long while...:)

[Heretic]

@Henrik
Oh,I forgot another thing!
Where is something about herbalism in my character?I really like herbalism and have some liquid in few nice bottles made myself.And notice something about elementalism (you saw my drawings,these unicorns are like elements,but not all yet) :cool:

[Nike]

@Haegemon, I'm not a merchant! I'm a traveler, a longbowmen with some basic magical knowledge (the power of air & lightnings)!

[4zzY]

i want to trade some herbs with Heretic
on a reasonable prise of course :D

do you have some salvia for meee pleeeeaseeeee
:rofl:

[the knightly sword]

i want to be an evil guy

[the knightly sword]

im thinkin out chapter20

[Haegemon]

We are stucking in dragons and magical powers,etc. I think there are enough beasts of many colors to fullfit a 'legends book'... Why don't character LotRings. :rolleyes:

Everybody wants to be the main character and thats imposible. We must pick some as main and the others as secondary or extras. :nono:

@Sir Turylon.- Your narrative is interesting, go ahead. But it's suposed there aren't white dragons. Except those who don't fly... :D


@Haegemon, I'm not a merchant! I'm a traveler, a longbowmen with some basic magical knowledge (the power of air & lightnings)!

But your travels must have a pourpose...

I will "stick" one more time:
1.Unicorns are free creatures,they cannot submit to human being.I (Heretic) is only their friend,guardian of they freedom,their Moonar Forest,not a ruler to them.
2.Why you think here are no dragons?"They live in Carpathia...Stop in Lietuva when migrate".They live here of course,big,green dragons,called "slibinai" and some species have 9heads. :cool:

You don't have dragons cos you don't have great mountains, simply. ;)
Only Golden and Silver dragons like forests cos they were a product of carphatian science. Golden never move from their bornland. Silver migrate but always return to their bornland.
You got unicorns, nobody else got them... what more...

As you said Unicorns are free beings, but also are free to decide who help-back. Of course, CAN'T be used as beast of burden.


@knightly sword.- you can be... the dark night, that who is back of Elewyn course. You use him to spread the caos, and like many other you use, you need him by now. You can be the right hand of a misterious unknown evil. The master of the darkness is your master...

I updated the dictionary.

[the knightly sword]

@knightly sword.- you can be... the dark night, that who is back of Elewyn course. You use him to spread the caos, and like many other you use, you need him by now. You can be the right hand of a misterious unknown evil. The master of the darkness is your master...



haegemon thank you you inspired me :go: :)

[4zzY]

i figured it out
i did
the credit is all mine

Heretic drinks unicorn blood to remain eternally yound
and uses it also to prepare her magical elexires
she's a witch let her buuuurn
[no hard feeling Her just being silly]
ooops sorry
i want to be a bad character as well
but its too late for such a drastic change i suppose
[silly again dont pay me any attention]
:cheers: to knightly and his mighty sword :rofl:

[Haegemon]

i want to be a bad character as well
but its too late for such a drastic change i suppose
[silly again dont pay me any attention]
:cheers: to knightly and his mighty sword :rofl:

Not if the dark night controls you, but only for a while, and you'll lose you dragon cos he is a good guy. :p

[4zzY]

hmm thats the adjustment i wanted to make to my char
about relationship between dragon and rider
but ill post it latermaybe tonight maybe not

[Haegemon]

I think 4zzy is writing the next.


I edited 'the dictionary'

I wonder if they removed the max post length in this new forum layout....

I suggest, when we have enough material, it can be compiled in a new thread. This tread deleted.


@Heretic.- Your drawings are wonderful. :hello:

[the knightly sword]

Chapter 20 the unknown evilness north


North behind ragnards wild woods behind the mountains of midgard and the rivers of cimmeria.There lives evilness no human have ever seen.A city ruled by a warlord so dark that the bravest warriors shake ween they hear his name.no creature dare say his name.he was thirsty to kill and destroy humanity. beacuse of what it did to him.rumors tell that he was a human but darkness took him .before darkness took him he was an lord he was hero of kind.for about 700 before our heros time king huteman anstoer united with king frank anstoers and king drakoII anstoers and united with the white dragons they defeated him and his army.everone thought that he was killed but no his spirit fleed north were no 1 could reach him .now he has recoverd him self and seeking revenge on those how defeated him 700 years ago.Lord elewyn is controlled by his monster.now he rules an city named ragnork were his gathering his dark forces for 1 final strike against isengard were he was killed.


he have been seeking old demon magic and the art of immortallity and now his 10 times stronger then he was before. in his tower now runs his reporter "ohh my dark lord they have defeated our army in maidenbourg " he turn to the reporter "prepare my dragon my bidding will be maidenbourg to night .
to be continued



ok that was pretty ****y right . my english ****s
im 98% sure your gonna tell that it doesnt fit

[Sir Turylon]

two things

Keep it non-LOTR. please.

yer english is decent for 2nd language.

4zzy is not to turn evil. We cannot change one of our main female characters. (Besides, Turylon would sense her evil and not befriend her. and we can't have that... can we... *pulls sword out and points it at rest of you* no, we cannot) maybe the amulet could have wounded her... like the stab Frodo received in book 1 of LotR. (no perminent evil... I do not want to smite 4zzy too!).

@Heretic. Unicorns moo. :rofl:

Lastly.....

KEEP IT SIMPLE! I mean... seriously... stop trying to over-complicate the storyline.

Knightly... scrap that last part. It's too soon for the heroes to be in the cave. Let's get some adventuring through the lands first. :)

Main story plot has followed this.

Henrik and Turylon live in Maidenbourg with a bunch of fair maidens. Henrik keeps hitting on everything and drinking everything in sight. Turylon keeps trying to help him turn from those wicked ways. Heretic lives with unicorns, which just so happen like helping Turylon because he saved one of them from an evil dragon a decade ago, and likes to dabble with "medicinal herbs." Sir Elewyn has been transformed by some evil and the remaining good nobles are trying to help him. Couple of odd characters see to be addind some depth to story but not really advancing the plot too much. (good that they put some parts of the main plot in though.) 4zzy had her daddy captured by the evil, her lands pillaged? and she's starting to... "like" a few of the other nobles... *cough* Drake is still madly in... with a certain somebody. (a spell perhaps?) A new ominous evil force has risen... and the nobles have to rethink their plan on how to help Elewyn turn good again. A strange knight with a large sword appeared suddenly... could he be a spy for the evil lord? The nobles set off to the dragon cave.. Henrik, Turylon, 4zzy, Drake, Heretic, and Spudster went. no dragons... no unicorns... they are traveling incognito. lol. Knightly Sword is back at teh keep still... perhaps that was a mistake leaving him there?


who's writing chapter 21?


PS. Like hagey said... main characters and supporting characters. I think the main ones have been plotted in already.. so all new ones should be supporting ones... till we reach the ulitmate evil.

[the knightly sword]

two things



.

KEEP IT SIMPLE! I mean... seriously... stop trying to over-complicate the storyline.

Knightly... scrap that last part. It's too soon for the heroes to be in the cave. Let's get some adventuring through the lands first. :)

Main story plot has followed this.

Henrik and Turylon live in Maidenbourg with a bunch of fair maidens. Henrik keeps hitting on everything and drinking everything in sight. Turylon keeps trying to help him turn from those wicked ways. Heretic lives with unicorns, which just so happen like helping Turylon because he saved one of them from an evil dragon a decade ago, and likes to dabble with "medicinal herbs." Sir Elewyn has been transformed by some evil and the remaining good nobles are trying to help him. Couple of odd characters see to be addind some depth to story but not really advancing the plot too much. (good that they put some parts of the main plot in though.) 4zzy had her daddy captured by the evil, her lands pillaged? and she's starting to... "like" a few of the other nobles... *cough* Drake is still madly in... with a certain somebody. (a spell perhaps?) A new ominous evil force has risen... and the nobles have to rethink their plan on how to help Elewyn turn good again. A strange knight with a large sword appeared suddenly... could he be a spy for the evil lord? The nobles set off to the dragon cave.. Henrik, Turylon, 4zzy, Drake, Heretic, and Spudster went. no dragons... no unicorns... they are traveling incognito. lol. Knightly Sword is back at teh keep still... perhaps that was a mistake leaving him there?






**** man you sacred the hell out of me man i ok i will take of the part with in the cave sorry but do your really need to scream man

[Sir Turylon]

**** man you sacred the hell out of me man i ok i will take of the part with in the cave sorry but do your really need to scream man


lol. sorry about the big text. I did not think it'd be that big... I'll edit it down. :)