[en] The Tavern at the Inn

[Angryminer]

I meant that the complete army is east of Adrianople. I am the most westward of the allies and I am directly to the east side of the city walls, which is still more westwards than any other. You're to the east of me. After that Kuno and Dobber, then Richard and Hawk Knight.
Can you point me to a misleading section? I modified the post a bit, but can't find an outright mistake. Anything I should improve?

Here goes number two... :cheers:

Angryminer

[Traveller]

Aha, that makes it more clear for me now. And it's not about misleading section, maybe because it's kinda late (00:41) and I haven't slept well the last two nights... :rolleyes:

[Dobber]

Angryminer, one little mistake, maybe 2, I said Richard charged unexpectedly not hawk_knight and the other mistake , hawk_knight is with your group, he came to the city ahead of the main army. I said Richard charged in order to explain his entry to the story.

[Angryminer]

True. But Richard said Hawk Knight charged. So well *shrugs* either way it isn't completely right...
And I said we all met while moving southwards. And Hawk Knight is on horseback with his men. So it is senseful that he swapped to the east flank.

Angryminer

[Dobber]

Yeah Richard wrote that hawk_knight charged to his aid when he saw him alone in front of his men, this was after Richard had attacked and the army was falling back and Richard grabbed the flag and ran toward the enemy to rally the troops, then hawk_knight saw what was happening and ran to his aid only to arrive to late, Richard was already filled with arrows.
Anyway it doesn't matter to me I'm just a filler in the story, trying to fill in for the slacking Bard's that are still alive but not writing anything. I had to come back from death to do so, irony.

[Angryminer]

Edited the post above to include the corrections. Hopefully everything's alright now.

Angryminer

[Prince Eric of the Lorah Clan]

Angryminer gets 3 rounds of beer! :cheers:

[Angryminer]

*Hears a cricket chirp*

Ehem... *points at the tale*
The next one who adds to the story get's my third beer. :go:
(Well, it is a few days old, but I assume it isn't toxic yet...)

Angryminer

[NaVatar]

As I can see it, I can't add anymore to the story from Travis eyes (I even tried to make room for a enemy bard!) and be honest, do you really want to have me babbling on things up in Mercia. :wink:

So for the time being (or till you end the siege and/or defeat the bysantines) i'm off the hook. :cheers:

I'll give two of my finest wine bottles to the next one who writes in the story!

[Dobber]

What good is a wine bottle without any wine?

[Angryminer]

What good is a wine bottle without any wine?Stop w(h)ining and write!
:rofl: Some jokes I just can't resist.... :wink:

Angryminer

[Dobber]

Hahaha !
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Obviously Kuno and Dobber have to decide what to do.

I made that decision in my last post.


We are not close enough to cover his advances, we must remain in our postion as long as possible to cover the approach to Kuno, Angryminer, Traveller and hawk_knight, buying them time to organize their defense

[Dobber]

I'll buy a round to celebrate Moryarity's promotion to Moderator! :cheers:

[NaVatar]

That's worth at least five rounds! :cheers:

Great going Moryarity! :go:

[Xuca]

Congratulations, Moryarity! :cheers:

[Prince Eric of the Lorah Clan]

Congratulations, Moryarity! A round of beer for everyone! Enjoy! :cheers:

[Traveller]

Oho, there's even beer on the case?! Congratulations, Mory! :cheers: :cheers:

[RoadRunner]

...and from me a bunch of flowers! :go:

[Traveller]

Some flowers from all of us! http://bg-science.info/forum/style_emoticons/default/flowers.gif

[Richard]

So many flowers, make me think there are hippies here:rofl: , lol just messing around:silly:
Anyways where did all the steam go:nono: . This story will never end at this pace. Kill me already for God's sake!